Hope
1 min
The Edmund Fitzgerald Is Out There
Russell Thorburn
No sun today, the rolling choppers bent on their tempest,
and that great graveyard of water never
gives up its dead. A man beholds the suffering
in a flooding hatch, sees his fate suddenly sealed,
like Fortunato who recognizes the others,
the water an avalanche of cold that will suck out
your breath like the last minutes on a clock.
A ghostly bubbling echo of your remaining life,
hands struggling to remain above the waterline.
That's me in my tennis shoes, headed to the Coast Guard
Station, with its rescue vessel moored to the breakwall.
On the other side, wild water, and I always stop
like a sentinel to scan the heaving horizon
for a floundering swimmer, someone washed away.
It's this poem then with its slackening lines
that I'd throw to the drowning hopeless,
like those others falling into death's edge,
who happen to be reading my poetry,
deciding my syntax or subject, misplaced
commas: my name hardly mattering at all.
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